Most of people like to take a trip. They have several options such as backpacking travel and tour travel trip. There are some similarities and some different parts about backpacking travel and tour travel trip.
There are several different parts between them. First, backpacking travel is difficult for you to think where you want to go to, where you have to live……etc. Therefore, you have to prepare schedule in advance. However, tour travel trip is much easier because you don’t think those problems, just follow schedules and tour guides. Second, outlays are much higher if you want to backpack travel. By contrast, tour travel trip’s outlays are much cheaper, because we can get discount on fees. Third, as s backpacker, you can go everywhere and don’t be afraid that you may influence other members because of personal factors. Finally, you can make more friends than backpacking travel if you choose tour travel trip. Not only can you make more friends, but also you learn how to establish interpersonal relationship in a group.
Furthermore, the two type of travel also have similarities. You can realize different culture no matter which type of travel you choose, for example.
To sum up, backpacking travel and tour travel trip not only have some similarities and some different parts but also have advantages and disadvantages. It depends on you to think which one you suit.
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回覆刪除Penny, I'm glad to see you produce a good piece of work with clear thesis statement and great essay structure and organization. Your contrast in paragraph 2 is really awesome. However, compared to your second paragraph, your third paragraph, which is about similarities, seemed to be little. I am sure you are aware of that, too.
回覆刪除By the way, I like the way you put 'for example' at the end of line 4 from the bottom. It's nicely done.